Subject: и это позволит...ежегодно получать дополнительную прибыль в среднем в размере econ. Два судна класса «Сокол» смогут перевозить объем ранее перевозимый судами «Бурханов», «Сергиевский» и «Гнездилов», и это позволит в течение ближайших пяти лет ежегодно получать дополнительную прибыль в среднем в размере $10 млн. в год за счет существенной экономии на расходах на топливо и увеличения объема перевозимых грузов.Во первых, "позволит": will allow требует дополнения - which will allow us to generate during the next five years on average an additional annual profit of $10 million...? |
...and for the following 5 years it will generate in average additional $10M profit annually thanks to... |
may result in an additional profit of... per year/p.a. holds the prospect of an extra... by way of profit may generate a further... etc только мне кажется, что вместо in average additional - лучше бы (an additional)... on the average |
Two Sokol-class ships will be able to carry the volume of goods until now (jointly?) carried by ships "Burkhanov" "Sergius" and "Gnezdilov" , which will over the next five years generate an average $ 10 million in extra (annual) profits (annually) due to substantial fuel savings and increased volume of goods shipped. Or: Over the next five years, this will help generate … |
they will carry the amount of goods equal to that previously carried by... ... 'Gnezdilov' RESULTING IN an average annual additional profit of $10 M |
Two Sokol-class MVs will be able to carry the payload previuosly handled by M/V Burkhanov, M/V Sergievsky, and M/V Genzdilov, and this will, over the next five years, contribute to generating an extra profit of $10M on average per annum, owing to marked fuel economy and increase in the volume of cargo shipments. не идеально, но Забудем кавычки, ships, goods(?) etc. |
Two Sokol type vessels ... |
Забудем кавычки, ships, goods(?) etc. Кавычки -- да |
Кстати, Alex16, "позволит" в некоторых контекстах можно перевести как "it will make it possible to". |
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