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Kryzhanovska O.B. The ways to raise competitive capacity of bank on the financial services market.
A qualification project(degree thesis ) for obtaining the qualification “Economist”, educational and qualifying level(degree) “ Master ” in the direction 0501 “ Economics and entrepreneurship” and with speciality 8.050105 “Banking” / Lviv Banking Institute of University of Banking NBU. – Lviv, 2010.
In this qualification project (thesis) is analysed a competitive position of I group banking institutions on the financial services market, in imitation of public joint-stock company “Folksbank” are described competitive superiorities of bank, and are estimated factors of a foreign capital influence with a competitive capacity of III group banks.
The theoretical analysis of a competitive superiorities forms gave a chance to distinguish such a bank superiorities on the financial services market as: image(prestige) of bank, payments system and range of services, efficient advertising, presence of affiliated system and prospects to expand it, management, high quality of services, value of statutory capital and resources, classification of workers, stable client base, correspondent network, presence of exchange permit or general licence. Are proposed the ways to raise competitive capacity of bank on the financial services market. The basic results can be used by commercial banks.
Keywords : competitive capacity, bank, financial services market, financial institutions.

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Пути повишения конкурентоспособности банка на ринке финансовых услуг.
Дипломная робота на получение квалификации "Економист" образовательно-квалификационного уровня " Магистр" по направлению 0501 "Економика и подпренемательство" по специальности 8.050105 "Банковское дело" / Львовский институт банковского дела Университета банковского дела НБУ. Львов, 2010.
В дипломной роботе проведено анализ конкурентной позиции банковских установ I групи на рынке финансовых услуг, на примере ПАО( публичное акционерное общество) "Фольксбанк" приведена характеристика конкурентних преимуществ банка, а так же дана оценка факторов влияния иностранного капитала на конкурентоспособность банков 3 групи. Теоретический анализ форм конкурентних преимуществ предоставил возможность выделить такие преимущества банка на рынке фынансовых услуг как : имидж банка, система розчетов и спектр услуг, действующая реклама, наличие филийной сети и перспективи ее розширения, менеджмент, высокое качество услуг, величину статутного капитала и активов, класификацию работников, стойкую клиэнтуру, кореспондетскую сеть, наличие валютной или генеральной лицензии. Предложено пути повишения конкурентоспособности банка на рынке финансовых услуг. Основные результати роботи могут быть использованими комерческими банками.
Ключевие слова: конкурентоспособность, банк, рынок финансовых услуг, финансовые организации

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Ways of Increasing Bank Competitive Advantage in the Financial Services Market

Masters Degree Graduation Thesis
Qualification: Finance Specialist/Economist
Stream: 0501 Economics of Entrepreneurship
Specialization: 8.050105 Banking

Lviv Banking Institute of the National Bank of Ukraine Banking University
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Lviv, 2010

The thesis deals with the analysis of the competitive position of group 1 (type 1?) banking institutions in the financial services market. A use case of JSC Folksbank is considered to describe the competitive advantages of the bank. In addition, the impact of foreign capital on banks of group 3 (type 3?) competitive position is evaluated. The analysis of the different factors that affect competitive advantage of a bank allowed us to single out the following key elements: bank's image, existing payment system and the range of provided services, efficient advertising, expanded presence through growing branch network, effective management, high quality of service, amount of statutory capital and other assets, employee category classification system, stable client base, correspondent bank network, ...
Some ways of increasing bank competitive advantage in the financial service market are proposed and can be implemented by ....

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